Action Plan: Critical Investigation

TEACHERS RESPONSE:

www: a range of theories incorported in quite an embitious essay.
ebi: more specific examples needed - Facebook posting/tweets etc to back up your points and for you to analyse 

SECOND RESPONSE:

www: good use of mdia terminologies and theorists, good explantion and well thought of quotes used to back your answer
ebi: shorter your sentences, very long. Try to justify statements more using your own opinion

THIRD REPONSE:

www: good use of institutions and ideologys
ebi: more media langauge 

FORTH RESPONSE

www: good use of social wider context some political references
ebi: add more political, historical, historical and economic wider context

FIFTH RESPONSE

www: a lot of information on representations, media technology and media effects
ebi: link some to moral panic and add more news values

SIXTH RESPONSE

www: good amount of refrences of each page and good use of books, websites etc
Ebi: review some of the footnotes to doule check

SEVNTH RESPONSE

www: good amount of research in the bibliography and nicely set 
ebi: take all page numers off



SELF EVALUATION:

i have given myself a level 3 : 32/48: 

www: this is because i have produced a proficient investigation, where i have explored my chosen topic and demonstrate autonomous research and exploration by presenting 60 functional bibliography and source list. Furthermore i believe i have used a good amount of theories in my critical investigation that have links to my title. I have also done many research and found 60 quotes to use in my critical investigation which has made my c.i more academic. 

Another reason i have given it a level 3 is because i have made sure my investigation demonstrates knowledge and understanding of media concepts, contexts and critical debates that are relevant to m chosen area of investigation.


ebi: In order to make it a level 4  i will need to make my critical investigation fluent and analytical which explores my chosen topic from a clear, autonomous and critical prospective by making use of extensive and wide ranging research such as adding quotes from facebook and twitter to back up my answer.